Racquel
Great job – love the “nan na nna ” guitar part – it became an awesome hook in its own right!
Your diction is crystal clear, it is a wordy song and you never missed a beat…
Loved your vocals. Awesome talent. And a good sense of feeling injected into the lyric.
The ad lib bits are always the best bits for me – they are very surprising and shine new lights on part of the song – and even though I wrote it – It makes me think – “oh, that now has a different, but better, meaning”….